Editorial Services

My editorial services are ideal for writers who are trying to improve a full length story, novel or memoir with an aim towards publication.

Editorial Approach
As I first read your work, I write extensively in the margins. These are my spontaneous reactions to the text as I encounter it on the page, and could include line edits, questions, or suggestions where you might go deeper or expand. On my second read, I provide a more detailed evaluation which could include thoughts on structure, pace, orchestration of scenes, character development, narrative tension, cohesiveness, voice, etc. This all culminates in a several-page, detailed critique. You receive clear, concrete suggestions for improving your manuscript.

My goal is not to impose a blueprint of what your story, novel or memoir should be, but to help you write your story as only you can — through your own unique vision. I want you to realize the endless array of choices that are available to you. And I want you to become aware that you’re making deliberate choices every step of the way–paragraph by paragraph, sentence by sentence, word by word. This gives you much more control over your material and also tremendous freedom.

Follow-Up Discussion
After you’ve reviewed my response to your manuscript, I am available to answer your questions and elaborate on my written comments by e-mail, or by telephone.

Fees
After speaking with you and having a preliminary reading of your manuscript, I will provide a quote for your critique. Quotes are based on the length and complexity of your manuscript and will be provided prior to the commencement of any work.

Submission Guidelines
Please submit manuscripts in the following format:
double-spaced, 12-point font
minimum 1-inch margins
Please include name, title, and page numbers on each page

Manuscripts can be submitted in hard copy via regular mail, or as a word attachment via e-mail. Please contact me before submitting your manuscript.

Getting Started
By way of introduction, I offer a free 45-minute phone consultation in which I give my response to a piece of writing you send me via email or post. This initial response isn’t as intensive as I would provide if we were to work together, but it will give you a good idea of whether or not I’m the right reader for you. And it will give me a sense of your writing, what your goals are, and whether or not I believe I can be helpful to you. Then assuming we’re a good match, we can move forward with your manuscript.

Arranging a Free Consultation
Let’s talk. I want to know about you, your writing experience and what you’re striving to achieve with your work. I also want to get a sense of any obstacles that might be holding you back from creating the truest, most powerful story, novel or memoir you can.

Contact me. Please tell me:

• the type of work you’re seeking guidance on: novel, memoir, short story or essay
• word count or number of double-spaced pages
• a brief description of your writing project and writing background
• what you’re eager to talk about vis a vis your writing, and
• the date you wish to submit your manuscript.